All the geeks are making a Star Trek reference, & so I know that you’ve filled in the blank. Space.
In a way, it’s the last thing that people think about when they
write. Most people think about the words, then how they’re arranged
(sentence structure), then the sum of the words (composition &
meaning), then sometimes the selection (vocabulary) or presentation
(grammar & spelling), but very little time is spent on the
not-words.
The not-words are everything else that goes into good communication -
the pauses, the non-verbal cues, the speed & fluency of delivery,
the tone, accent, volume, … & I could go on. In writing, we try to
emulate some of these, or else represent them when writing about speech,
but most people tend to forget about them when theyr’e writing ‘formal’
or ‘technical’ communication. Why is that?
The most important not-words are punctuation, & sentence
structure & grouping. The latter is all about having a good, or
appropriate, style & putting structure into what you write. The
former, however, is a black hole which many are afraid will drag them
into another dimension, so it’s best to avoid.
Don’t be afraid of that dark spot in the field of stars that is your
communication. It will not suck you in. Punctuation is necessary to keep
the universe interesting. The space between the stars is what allows us
to differentiate them, to make patterns in our head, to give meaning to
the little clusters of light.
Writing is often gaseous - it expands to fill the void (page). But
stars only have so much power inside them - they can only be so big
before they either burn themselves out too quickly, or else become too
thin to see. An essay - the height of writing - is complete when nothing
else can be removed. This leaves spaces.
I like punctuation. I like to more than pepper my sentences, I like a
good dose of salt across each line to show where I think the audience
should pause for thought or for a breath, or in readiness for a new
idea. Punctuation fills the gaps with space. I know that sounds a little
self-evident, but it shows how a sky full of stars is only enhanced by
the gaps between. It shows how exploring such a galaxy on a page is only
more interesting for the distances that need to be travelled. It shows
how new discoveries can be made only when the effort to find a new path
across the words makes the journey prohibitive or difficult for ordinary
people.
Readers appreciate a good journey. Writers should provide one through
the application of space. Let the reader boldly go where no readership
has gone before.
PS. I like to boldly split infinitives when I can on the basis that
just because it’s ‘impossible’ in Latin, there is no reason why it
shouldn’t happen in English. I specifically avoided talking about this
area, given the cultural references, because it would have muddied my
theme. I’ll have to somehow find space to talk more about this some
other time.
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